Love blossoms under the most unusual situation as a teenage girl is suddenly thrust into the world of the nudist when she is tricked to go on a family holiday with her best friend in this nudist romance story.
Nude In France
A reluctant nudist teenager finds love and romance
Jenny and Jody who have been close friends since beginning primary school, fall out over the revelation that Jody fancies Jenny's brother, Tom.
Jenny tries to make Jody suffer by not telling her that their planned holiday to France is to a nudist resort. It all backfires on her when Tom helps a very embarrassed and innocent Jody through her first time at being naked in front of someone and a romance develops very quickly.
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I joined your group yesterday and asked for Nude in France as my free book.
Let me start by saying I enjoyed it, the characters in themselves were believable, and at the time of reading I had no problem with the stories basis.
However, when I thought about it afterwards ( the sign of a good story is that you want to add bits mentally, be it a prequel, sequel, or to find out what other characters are doing at the same time as you're telling us about what the main characters are up to) I did have a few thoughts.
If the two girls have known each other from primary school was there never a point at which Jenny and Jody discussed holidays, or showed each other holiday pics? Did they never have sleepovers at which Jenny wanted to sleep naked?
Would the nudists seriously keep clothes on just in case Jody visited? Maybe gowns behind the door?
There were a few other minor things, all in all I as a nudist myself enjoyed it.
Some nudists would say there was too much sex to be classed as a nudist tale, but nudists are still people with sexual needs and desires, and Jody and Tom are at the age where hormones run rampant anyway.
I'd love to see this expanded, keep in the honest nudist moments (expecting to be the centre of attention, etc), and build up the other characters ( I expected Jenny to find someone, and when the mum and dad heard Jodys pleasure I thought they might "enjoy" it more themselves), deal with going to the beach, have the couple go out in the evening and see the sexual goings on, etc.
I'll recommend this to non prudish friends, and will enjoy reading more of your writings when I get chance.